my first metalcore attempt

[Snik]

I registered few minutes ago, so I wanted to say hi. My name is Jarek and I'm from Poland. In the begining I want to sorry for my english which is not my native language. I hope to learn something here.

Cutting to the chase: I recently started recording a kind of metalcore stuff. I recorded some material few days ago and started mixing it. I would appriciate if you could listen to it and give me some tips about mix, recording, composition or pretty much everything. I'm a newbie and I don't have a decent recording equipement but I think it sounds well.
I plan to write and record vocals and later finish the whole track. What do you think? Is it worth working on?

 

[TripleM]

Yes it's worth working on. It sounded good. I couldn't figure out the intro and i was thinking, "This sucks." But when it kicked in, it sounded good. Vocals can make a mix an order of magnitude more difficult. Just warning.

Your English seems pretty good too.

Welcome to the board.

 

[VomitHatSteve]

Most everything (after the intro) sounds pretty good to me, except for the crash. It sounds like the compression is really pumping the crashes on the kick.