My first 16 bars on a beat I produced - Feedback for feedback

[ayobyali]

Hey, I'm new to this forum, would mean a lot if you could check out my track.



I will try to leave feedback to everyone that engages in the thread.

Thanks!

 

[TripMX]

Pretty dark, and your rap flow is really smooth with a "natural" feel, which gives the listener a means of actually "feeling" your lyrics. As for the beat, it's like icing on the cake; it's pretty much flawless. Overall, it sounds pretty professional; do keep up the good work!

 

[Chili]

Moved to the mp3 clinic

 

[hhinterwebz]

Hey, I'm new to this forum, would mean a lot if you could check out my track.



I will try to leave feedback to everyone that engages in the thread.

Thanks!

it sounds great! the vocals mesh well with the beat, and you can flow. better than expected.