my best yet...

[corg]

Hello everyone, this is my first submission to the clinic. I hope everyone will take a quick listen to my short little ditty and let me know what you think. My friend and I started a group not too long ago, and we're trying to get some feedback, as this is going to be one of the tracks on our up and coming cd.

the song is called:

red derby
http://www.nowhereradio.com/bajapraja

Thanks so much. I'd love to hear your opinion.

 

[powderfinger]

......well, it sounds like you guys were having fun.........all the levels seem fine for what it is.......obviously it could use some work if this is a cd you plan on selling.....if it's a cd for fun and friends it sounds fine........

 

[TheRealWaldo]

I know you're a newbie, so I'll be nice. Contact me asap!

waldo@nowhereradio.com

 

[chrisharris]

ooops. That Waldo guy, he HATES multiple accounts and stuff. Pretty cool chap, though...so long as you contact him NOW. hehehehe

 

[Charva]

whats a multiple account? Should I call the Minister of Finance or the IRS?

 

[Myx62]

I got a dirty little message at the link?? I guess Uncle Waldo is upset......Someone's gonna get a spankin......

 

[corg]

No! Wheres my song, I feel like someone just ripped me a new asshole. Well, Im sorry guys, your going to have to miss out on the euphoric state this song produces for a little while. Im not quite to sure what this "multiple accounts" thing is, but I guess I will just have to live with it. Oh well, I will try to find another way to host it in the near future I guess.

Thanks a bunch.

Revision: Just mailed Waldo, hopefully, the situation will be cleared up soon, and you can download it again. Here is a little tease of my newest song, lyrics only:

"Please let me help you, help you help me
You feel the waves crash down, and tumble over me
Ive got to, find a new job, and end this misery
My little paycheck
Oh little paycheck

I went to get my daughter a
Birthday present
She wasnt happy because I
Dont have the funds now
Im talking about being
Laid off"

There is more, believe me. I call that "Paycheck"

C

 

[TheRealWaldo]

Back up, now make sure you get your bud synergy to get in touch with me ASAP as well!

W.

 

[corg]

Waldo, why are you so great ! Anyways, "red derby" is back up thanks to Waldo. Take a listen, and leave a little something, even if you just say "Hey" or something, it works. My newest release, "Paycheck" will be up soon. Ill have synergy shout you a holler W.

Thanks.

 

[chrisharris]

Okay...it's roughly one minute of what sounds like two white guys almost trying to rap over a repetetive and uninventive guitar part...and the guitar's out of tune.

If that's what you were going for, you nailed it.

Congratulations on your best ever


-nobody

 

[Kramer]

Comedy?

 

[Charva]

I'm sorry, I did not even listen to the song (yet) but I'm the culprit who gave this thread 5 stars for the sheer comedy value of the first few posts. It sure is hell around here sometimes but thats what makes this BBS so much friggin fun.

I will listen when not under the influence

later, Charva

 

[Track Rat]

Hmmmmmmmm...well, it's, ah........hmmmmmmm..................

 

[Charva]

Ok, I'm now sober and not under the influence. It's a good recording and I'm kinda diggin the groovy beatnick vibe, coffeehouse thing. TUNE THAT DAMN GUITAR SON!








Best of luck in your musical venture, Charva


www.geocities.com/charvster

 

[B.SABBATH]

fun thread!

interesting.. the recording seems decent.. and, ya know..

 

[corg]

Ahh, yes, when the yukelele was in tune, it just didnt sound right, so we had to tweak it a bit. I think the water tank really gives it the vibe. We didnt want to mess with any levels or any big effects because I dont want to take away from the style and feel. It is a song that is mainly about feeling it. The vibe in the room was incredible. I will take a photo with the digi. cam some day. But, wow, if you were in there when the magic took place, it is like bliss. And the song is almost like an enigma in itself, although once the root of it has been contrived, the message is like a slap on the face. It really means a lot to me, I have been known to break down and cry during it during gigs. But hey, that is what adds to its essence. Dont look at the song as a vocal, a git, and drums, look at it as a whole. Look for what it really means. Then you can experience it. Any ideas for my next song, all will be used.

Thanks.