i'm playing with my new Dynaudio Speakers today and listening to some mp3 clinic stuff, and I thought I would comment. The beginning, I likey. it kinda turns a little Blink for my later on, but I'm more into heavier stuff right now so whatever. I find the guitars a little grating for me, I brought down about 4db of 1.2 kHz or so, seemed to helpe for my ears. i also took down a little in 300Hz (little bastard) and it made the drums sound a little less muddy.
I agree that the vocals should be out a little more, but if you Eq and bring down the guits a little that may help.
It sounds to me like the bass guitar is carrying alot of the low end here, I'd like to hear a little more kick low, but I do like the sound of the kick. The snare drum tends to get lost a little (almost like the drummer got tired), I like it in the "you remember how..." part but then it starts to drop off in the "I don't know part", then comes back in the "you remember when..."part. But that may be on purpose.
Also I think there may be some phase cancelation w/ the guitars. Listen to them in mono and see if you hear them drop out. Try reversing the polarities and see if it makse a difference.
But I'm still breaking in and learning my speakers, so i may be talking out my a$$