bknot1
Hustle Magic!! We Got It.
Here it its My !st Few beats ...let me know what you think,,,
http://www.nowhereradio.com/knotme/singles
enjoy..thanks
http://www.nowhereradio.com/knotme/singles
enjoy..thanks
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bknot1
Hustle Magic!! We Got It.
feedback needed...
Abyyss
that's life
Peepin' 'em out at the moment. Info. willl follow shortly.
Hold up for a bit.
Hold up for a bit.
Abyyss
that's life
OK here we go..........
Track #2: I like the melody. Not really feelin' the drums, though they do add 2 the pace which is good. I like the strings but this track REALLY NEEDS A BASSLINE! lol. Needs a hard hittin' bass - nuthin' too complicated.
Track #5: I like the drum pattern, but I don't like like the kit you've chose. and the the extra drum bit that comes in "dum-dum-dum-dum-dum" I ain't keen on. The melody is a bit clichéd with just getting higher. I like the bass on this when it's in - that's the sort of thing you need on the "Track #2" You should have the bass all the way through + something else for the hook IMO, sounds a bit blank in those places.
Track #10: Don't like the intro or the tune that runs through. Not keen on your drum kit choice again. Again, it needs a bassline, especially if it's supposed 2 be a club beat! The trumpets are pretty good.
With ur beats the main problem seems to be the kit choices and in some cases the actual sequencing + the severe lack and need of a bassline.
Ur ideas are good, u just need 2 work on expressing them. U've got summit coming up though.
- Hope that was helpful.
Track #2: I like the melody. Not really feelin' the drums, though they do add 2 the pace which is good. I like the strings but this track REALLY NEEDS A BASSLINE! lol. Needs a hard hittin' bass - nuthin' too complicated.
Track #5: I like the drum pattern, but I don't like like the kit you've chose. and the the extra drum bit that comes in "dum-dum-dum-dum-dum" I ain't keen on. The melody is a bit clichéd with just getting higher. I like the bass on this when it's in - that's the sort of thing you need on the "Track #2" You should have the bass all the way through + something else for the hook IMO, sounds a bit blank in those places.
Track #10: Don't like the intro or the tune that runs through. Not keen on your drum kit choice again. Again, it needs a bassline, especially if it's supposed 2 be a club beat! The trumpets are pretty good.
With ur beats the main problem seems to be the kit choices and in some cases the actual sequencing + the severe lack and need of a bassline.
Ur ideas are good, u just need 2 work on expressing them. U've got summit coming up though.
- Hope that was helpful.
bknot1
Hustle Magic!! We Got It.
thanks for the + feedback i will keep that in mind... thanks
soundboy
New member
1st track sounds a little mis placed its like you scared to put the instruments in there i keep waiting for the build up to get somwhere but it never arives, bring all the sounds in and let them play at once. you poking them in and out makes it sound hollow.
2ndtrack same as above
3rd track now this is more like it more going on at once in the mix now it just dropped out. You need some better sounds but good try keep at it.
this is just my opinion so dont take it to heart. you on the right track
2ndtrack same as above
3rd track now this is more like it more going on at once in the mix now it just dropped out. You need some better sounds but good try keep at it.
this is just my opinion so dont take it to heart. you on the right track
bknot1
Hustle Magic!! We Got It.
thanks
T
tj jr.
New member
track 2 sounds like its going to go somewhere, A simple idea to get it started would be a nice obvious sounding snare. Just my opinion. Could be wrong. I kept waiting for it anyway.
bknot1
Hustle Magic!! We Got It.
thanks for the feedback