Moroaica My Beloved (melodic black metal)

[yvesa]

Here's the latest song I've done. (no vocals yet)

I'd like to know what you think, any issues with the mixing (or song)?
I've tried to keep all previous comments to mind while mixing this.

Moroaica My Beloved

I've gotten comments on the drum (machine) playing so I worked harder on trying to get better drum pattern happening.

Thanks in advance!

 

[yvesa]

updated - added small intro section and changed the guitar sound a bit.

 

[SteveE9C6]

This is actually world class stuff.

I can see a young girl being led down a dim candle lit pathway in a dank, dusty castle, by a group of robed and hooded attendents....


Now... The mix... excellent.
The drums... need a miniscule bit of variation in tempo.... think of a real drummer and their slight imperfections in speed. This breathes life into a track.

Coming out of the build up at about 3:50 I would suggest a pronounced gradual retard single beat/fill segue on the drums.

Very good.... Please note, comments coming from an old fart 54 y/o pedal steel player

 

[jpw23]

Great work........really liked it!!!!!

 

[yvesa]

Thanks for the comments guys, I updated the song again, made a few arrangement changes.

Coming out of the build up at about 3:50 I would suggest a pronounced gradual retard single beat/fill segue on the drums.

I don't quite understand what you meant...

 

[SteveE9C6]

I'll try to think of an example...

 

[yvesa]

I'll try to think of an example...

great thanks!