ok it worked that time
im not really sure what type of comments your looking for since its obviously not finished recording/mixing wise so ill try and keep that in mind.
As far as tracking goes everything sounds like your off to a good start except for the guitar. Its very thin and brittle sounding, it could possibly thicken up once you get some doubling going but the tone is still too midrangey/gainy for my taste. Just a thought. Maybe thats the way you wanted it, im not really sure.
As for the song, it sounds like you have some good spots to really get a heavy groove going but timing is going to make or break those types of sections. I can already hear a few places where things get out of whack and take away from the groove. I would get the basic rhythm guitar/bass and drums synced dead on before i started overdubbing solos/vocals if it were me.
Im not a big fan of this newer style of "metal" so take my advice for what it is. Id like to hear the song again once you get everything tracked and start doing some serious mixing. good work so far