Money Ova Bitches

[DJ'FINGAZ]

WHEN I TALK,YOU KNOW TO LISTEN.............

What do you guys think of this layout I did honoring "TUPAC".


BTW-My design name is "SPORADIC CREATIONS".....I treat my designs like I treat my music.Go at it with no set plan.Let the naturalness of ones self lead the way...
"M.O.B" by TERRELL AKA DJ'DINGAZ

 

[Chriss]

truthfully? I think it lookgs terrible, chunky and not very honouring...

 

[DJ'FINGAZ]

Criticism is my motivation

I take it you wouldn't like the colors,text and lens flare in this one huh
Always Remember that I pimp you

 

[LAZI]

Don't get offend dog. On the real i'm just letting you know.

The Pac thing looks corny and real boring. Too many of those big ass corny looking dollar signs. The colors suck and most of the ideas area too simple. You gotta learn how to sooth some of that shit out. I hate when cats use the same pictures twice in a piece. Your floating heads suck (one in middle is cool). You should blend those bitches from a angle starting just above where the neck begins across to the bottom of the skull to keep em from looking like somebody chopped their heads off.

The next on is a little better (background is). Your font sucks as usual. And even though you picked some decent colors and even appeared to have a few good idea in there nodoby can read this shit. You got too much going on behind the words to leave em the same color as the shit in the background. A lazi fuck like myself won't even bother to read that shit. In fact I was about to close it ignore this whole post again but decide to try to help.

Keep trying.

You really 14? Haha.

 

[DJ'FINGAZ]

I'm not offended

I love helpful constructive criticism.I want more.You don't like my art.You'll hate my music.They go hand n hand.Thanks Lazi!!!

 

[subtractor]

First off "Terrell", you are still a moron.

You need to ease up on the eye candy. Everything you do graphically looks like an eye candy demo.
The first one sucks.

The blue background on the second one is pretty nice though. But everything else on it is shit.

 

[DJ'FINGAZ]

You're also still a moron

Thanks for the feedback though asshole.....

 

[DJ'FINGAZ]

THIS LITTLE REVISION IS SHYTTY ALSO.....

 

[Chriss]

improved alot... still corny and chunky, but you're getting there... just remember that honouring tupac probably with all $ signs ain't gonna be the way... fade some more, it looks chunky... like some banner from a cheap ass porn site...

 

[ridl]

You should make rave fliers...