Mix my own song please

[Oxy Firdaus]

can u help me to mix my song ? I tried to mix but it doesn't sounds good.

Vocal :
InginKah Kau Pergi Vocal #1

Instrument song :
Inginkah kau pergi

Thank you, appreciate it.

 

[drtechno]

here you go:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/u9ni2y3go2l1qzv/InginKah Kau Pergi mix.wav?dl=0

 

[drtechno]

can u help me to mix my song ? I tried to mix but it doesn't sounds good.

Vocal :
InginKah Kau Pergi Vocal #1

Instrument song :
Inginkah kau pergi

Thank you, appreciate it.

Not bad. but you should work on your composition of your instrumental parts. IMHO, It needs more space to contrast the vocals like this:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=COiIC3A0ROM

or this:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eSMeUPFjQHc

 

[Btyre2013]

here's mine:

 

[Btyre2013]

here's the new version, that last version was the wrong one:View attachment 97834

 

[Oxy Firdaus]

here's the new version, that last version was the wrong one:View attachment 97834

wow thank you, that sounds really great !