zer0sig
headpiece full of straw
red room
3 fucking years dying that cold red room
what gives you the impetus to think that you can save me now?
(chorus):
you know why this bed is empty (x2)
and you waited too long to try to open the path to the garden
what was there is dead now
all the doors are closed now
the noose is off my neck now
and i refuse to make you a victim again
(chorus)
(outro verse)
i just
wish i knew
i had the
conviction
to live with
myself..
i figured i'd post. any feedback is cool. i'll try to get the motivation to post an mp3 sometime. the song is in drop d, with a quicker riff in d/db/d#/a# for the verse and a d/e chorus. the outro is picking in the sequence g#/a/d|g/g#/a/d/g-f-g(g slid down to f & back). well, that's vague enough. i'll just try to record it. my next song is going to be insanely bitter, probably, though i haven't decided what style to put it in (may have an acoustic and a mathcore version)
3 fucking years dying that cold red room
what gives you the impetus to think that you can save me now?
(chorus):
you know why this bed is empty (x2)
and you waited too long to try to open the path to the garden
what was there is dead now
all the doors are closed now
the noose is off my neck now
and i refuse to make you a victim again
(chorus)
(outro verse)
i just
wish i knew
i had the
conviction
to live with
myself..
i figured i'd post. any feedback is cool. i'll try to get the motivation to post an mp3 sometime. the song is in drop d, with a quicker riff in d/db/d#/a# for the verse and a d/e chorus. the outro is picking in the sequence g#/a/d|g/g#/a/d/g-f-g(g slid down to f & back). well, that's vague enough. i'll just try to record it. my next song is going to be insanely bitter, probably, though i haven't decided what style to put it in (may have an acoustic and a mathcore version)