[Metal] your feedback please!

[machinehater]

Hello!
I have startet a new project:

What do you say?
Thank you!

Armin

 

[VomitHatSteve]

Pretty cool. You've got a good variety of stuff going on for an instrumental piece, and your structure and composition is much more interesting than a lot of the metal out there these days.

I would have liked some vocals I think. It feels a little incomplete without them; like you were just trying out ideas more than writing an actual song.

Also, what do you have against machines? Don't be hating!

 

[machinehater]

Hey!
Thank you very much for your replay! (and for the "positiveness" of you replay )!
Vocals will follow, i hope i don't destroy the song with my vox

And about hating machines, this nickname is old, fear factory did theyr work on me

Armin

 

[Murdersgalore]

Im impressed

Got some really good production going on here. I think the reverb on the little clean part is a bit to springy sounding but that is subjective. Nice "wall of sound" guitars and alot of interesting timing choices and textures. Well done.

 

[machinehater]

Thank you very much! When i read this, i want to make more 17/16 stuff !

Greets!
Armin

 

[suprstar]

Wow man, that sounds really good, nice job! Love the style!

 

[machinehater]

thank you!
Never thought i would get so much positive feedback!


Armin

 

[Muffin]

Great job man, nice full sound. I love the chaoticness of your writing style. It takes a certain breed of musician to play the style you do(esspecially with timing).

I too would love to hear it with vox. I think for me what would have really tied the song together would've been a very heavy, brutal breakdown thrown in somewhere, but that's just my style.

Great job man, keep it up!

 

[machinehater]

Thank you man! Vox will follow =)! I have just done an "Intro", and soon i will record the whole vocals!

Armin

 

[joeym]

Great stuff, Armin!
I suspect cookie-monster vocals on this......
Loads of energy, nice double-bass parts and a fantastic guitar sound!

Joey

 

[suprstar]

Thank you man! Vox will follow =)! I have just done an "Intro", and soon i will record the whole vocals!

Armin

When you do complete it and get some vox in there, post it up here, I wanna make sure I hear it! Lookin forward to it,

 

[machinehater]

@ joey: ok, i will try !

@ Suprstar: i will post it =)!