Metal jam suggestions/opinions

[digmudvayne4lif]

Just finished recording my first real heavy song and wondering how everyone else thinks of it an any opnions, or suggestions. thanks

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?fid=5939

 

[Ironklad Audio]

i would definitely bring the drums down a bit in the mix...they totally overpower everything else

that and the cymbals are panned a bit wide for my taste and tend to sound a little "wishy-washy" here and there, which i'd guess is more of a room or mic placement thing than a mix thing

 

[Dogman]

Drums are a bit loud in the mix...drop them a bit, and the guitars should come through better.

Overall, good tune. I think the basic sounds are there, and you can tweak it pretty easily.

 

[digmudvayne4lif]

lowered the drums and tightened up a few things. anymore comments/suggestions?

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?fid=5952

 

[ecktronic]

lowered the drums and tightened up a few things. anymore comments/suggestions?

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?fid=5952

The guitars arent upfont enough I would say. Probably because the kick drum is overpowering the mix still.
Guitars sound quite procesed, although nice tone if you could get a less procese sound.

Eck