Metal cover track, I'd love opinions

[George Harwood]

Hello there, this is not what I would call a fully-complete mix, as I have not put as much time into it as I would generally, it is a more a test of my new guitar and a little bit of practise, however I would love to hear your opinions on the current state of the mix!

Because I don't have 5-string bass, I had to record the bass sections using my guitar and then pitch it down, which needless to say is no-where near as pleasant on the ears as a bass would be, alas.

 

[Music Box]

Great playing. Mix was OK i think except as you said the lack of bass was unfortunate and the bass sounds were not loud enough for my system. But take words with a pinch of salt as I am not not a good judge of or good maker of mixes. Sounds were good also.