Mesmerized Again by Meursault

[Meursault]

https://soundcloud.com/meursault71/mesmerized-again

What sounds bad?

 

[Robus]

Meursault, do you intend to comment on music others have posted? Or are you here simply to take and not give back?

 

[GONZO-X]

mesmerized again

interesting opening,
i like the groove

i like the rhythm breakdown.
i'd like to hear that underlying bass line a bit louder there......

this is a good start for a song,
but missing a vocal line to tie it all together,
it sounds half baked.

 

[RFR]

Meursault, do you intend to comment on music others have posted? Or are you here simply to take and not give back?

Are you now the mp3 clinic police?

 

[DM60]

Are you now the mp3 clinic police?

There is a new sheriff in town boys. Better watch yourselves. Check your guns into the sheriff's office.

 

[Meursault]

mesmerized again

interesting opening,
i like the groove

i like the rhythm breakdown.
i'd like to hear that underlying bass line a bit louder there......

this is a good start for a song,
but missing a vocal line to tie it all together,
it sounds half baked.

It is definitely music meant to have a rapper/singer on it.

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Meursault, do you intend to comment on music others have posted? Or are you here simply to take and not give back?

Sorry Robus.

 

[Bulls Hit]

I like the tune and the little bits that ebb and flow. Is it just me or is that snare way too forward?