Mervyn's way of the exploding fist

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I liked the song. I like your singing voice. Guitar riff was cool. Pitchy note here and there, but not a big problem. The intro was too long, but other than that it was a good song.

The mix is a bit of the mess. The low end is out of control. The guitar and drums are covering the vocal.
 
thanks for listening Triple.

the mix is a bit eratic as ive never use a guitar in ableton before so its a shot in the dark.

thanks for being honest about the mix as im gonna sort it out now.

nice one T ;)
 
I don't think it needs the shitty 40 second intro, you almost lost me if i had not forwarded. Other than that it's a nice simple kind of boring tune and I guess it'll do.
 
Hi hats really stand out, like they are in a seperate universe from the rest of the mix, and they are really loud to me. The kick is super boomy. The drums just sound out of place with the fuzzy muffled guitar.

Song feels like it's just the safe riff over and over again.

Is there a bass playing at all?
 
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