good!
I think the balance between instruments is very good. The chorus is nice and tight. I like the dynamic/sonic changes.
To me the hi-hats are a little too tinny sounding and the snare sound a bit hollow, but maybe that's the effect you were going for. This isn't a genre I listen too much, but I have pretty good ears, and I listen to a wide variety of music.
Interesting idea for a song. Overall good job.
Keep in mind that I am a songwriter/drummer, not a sound engineer, so take my feedback with a grain of salt.
Rock on!