I've been fiddling with this for awhile... sort of a dreamy electronica/pop piece. Any feedback is welcome.
http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?id=13147
http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?id=13147
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Mellow electronica
- Thread starter jmasek
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pretty nice reminds me of some of the stuff i listened to in the eighties. vocals sound really cool and sit perfectly with the synths. good sounds over all.
the break about 3/4 into the song is very interesting (real horns?) though i feel the song then sort of drops dead where it should climax. but maybe that's just a matter of opinion.
excellent!
the break about 3/4 into the song is very interesting (real horns?) though i feel the song then sort of drops dead where it should climax. but maybe that's just a matter of opinion.
excellent!
very 80s/gorillaz.
my bloody valentine comes to mind.
very well mixed. I wouldn't know what to change as far as that goes.
actually, the horns could be a bit lower, but maybe not, I don't know.
the song drags a bit. you need a rhythmic change. divide up the main idea a bit.
i like it. well done.
I think you'd like my song, its up this ally. Could you give me your 2 cents?
www.myspace.com/agentofmonaco
my bloody valentine comes to mind.
very well mixed. I wouldn't know what to change as far as that goes.
actually, the horns could be a bit lower, but maybe not, I don't know.
the song drags a bit. you need a rhythmic change. divide up the main idea a bit.
i like it. well done.
I think you'd like my song, its up this ally. Could you give me your 2 cents?
www.myspace.com/agentofmonaco
Thanks for listening and the feedback. I gave the vocals both forward and backward reverb, and then doubled the lead vocal with a "clean" version mixed with a lot of high end. I'm glad it sounded ok. The horns were done with freeware soundfonts.
I agree that the rhythm needs to break out a bit more at the 3/4 point - I think I might try to add a busier counter-rhythm to give it some more urgency.
I agree that the rhythm needs to break out a bit more at the 3/4 point - I think I might try to add a busier counter-rhythm to give it some more urgency.