Mediocre raps: Take 5

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What he was trying to say was you had hot lines but didn't ride the beat like you should have......Actually, that was what I was try'in to say....Keep at it though. All you need to do is keep your syllables rid'in the kick and snare correctly and WHAM!!! instant MC'ism.....
 
Yeah I was thinking that too...like around the beginning and the end mostly I thought it didn't flow well...but during the middle I think it was good.
 
yeah I see that the board is dying or dead.... Too bad though, this was a great board... Anyways it was ok, keep at it man, I can hear the quality climbing.
 
You're working at it and I can tell. Still needs some work in some spots (delivery mainly). Mix needs work but I can throw some pdf's your way that might help you out on that. IMO you try to talk too proper when you rap which might be killing any presence you can get. A little or a lotta slang is good, you might even try slurring your words (just a little to add emphasis).
 
Yeah man I'll take any help when it comes to mixing...I don't know shit about editing vocals, other than adding reverb.

Oh damn, I just noticed that when I said "every day I try" it sounds like "every day I cry". Oops, now I'm emo.
 
Fieva - Let Me Git Some Of Those Pdf Mixxes Too -
Im Hopin This Board Never Dies!!! Its Really My Only Home!!!!

Cant Really Addd Too Much Physical - I Agree That The "rhythm" Of The Delivery Is Not Quite There - It Seems Techinccally Right, But Just Not "there" In Spirit - Its Not The Lines Or The Words Its The Passion So To Speak
 
Aiight....I'll be at the studio comp tonight or tomorrow morning. I owe some people some stuff so I'll send it from there.
 
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