March of the Pachyderms

[DRMS_7888]

I just finished a rough draft of this song. I am planning on submitting it to a local music compilation CD, so any advice or suggestions you have would be great, thanks!

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[rayc]

There are some hesitations in the guitar theme that either need emphasising or removing.
Nice & quirky - sort of a maudlin Jonathon Richman. You need to do something with your panning when the lead theme isn't playing.
Good ideas happening.

 

[DRMS_7888]

There are some hesitations in the guitar theme that either need emphasising or removing.
Nice & quirky - sort of a maudlin Jonathon Richman. You need to do something with your panning when the lead theme isn't playing.
Good ideas happening.

Thanks for the input! By hesitations in the guitar theme, do you mean I should play up the stacato a little more, or get rid of it?

 

[rayc]

Either or.