Not sure I'm liking the kick-snare sounds so much, with all the world of sounds they sound kind of vanilla, especially the snare. Some kind of distortion would seem to work for drums on a track like this. The velocity of the snare also seems the same every time which is pretty noticeable since it is loud in the mix. Seems like every 4th hit or something should be an extra craaaack, make the track breathe a bit. I like the guitar sound, is that a sample? I like what was done with that. Overall it's creating a mood, I think you could take it further!