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I have these lryics I've been writing. I want to put in some weird ambient noises in the background, and try to give a real feel to the content. I'm not done with the lyrics yet, but I thought I'd see if you guys like 'em so far. The title is "I Saw Me A Vision"
Late one night,
Through your dead son’s sight.
I saw me a vision
Starts 3 suns bright
Ends in a room
Lost 23 years
No one has been there
Dead son fears
Sees sin drawn from
Side the room
Gathers thick
And thoughts consume
Floats behind,
And waits through doors
Promises pain
To sleeping whores
Fucking naked
And drenched in black
Mimics movement
? ? ?
Late one night,
Through your dead son’s sight.
I saw me a vision
Starts 3 suns bright
Ends in a room
Lost 23 years
No one has been there
Dead son fears
Sees sin drawn from
Side the room
Gathers thick
And thoughts consume
Floats behind,
And waits through doors
Promises pain
To sleeping whores
Fucking naked
And drenched in black
Mimics movement
? ? ?