loveshot(is this good)

[cashpapa]

[Part 1]
I’m mutterin
Oh like a mornin bird I’m flutterin
With words so loud that glass be shatterin
(With words)
With words I shouldn’t say
With words I shouldn’t play
I’m wanderin
Just like a gypsy yeah I’m wanderin
With chants that leave a breath go smotherin
(With chants)
With chants I shouldn’t say
With chants I shouldn’t play
[Pre chorus]
It’s when every scene I see
Fire between you and me
Divin in the memory, yeah
When my heart beats through a blaze
With each look into your face
I know there’s one thing in the place
[Chorus]
A loveshot
A loveshot
A loveshot
But never play too hard on me
You just take it easily
Guess I won’t be standin long
Baby you have hit me with
A loveshot
[Part 2]
I’m whistlin
Oh like a midnight ghost I’m whisperin
With thoughts that sound like bass be shiverin
(With thoughts)
With thoughts I shouldn’t say
With thoughts I shouldn’t play
I’m gamblin
Oh on my heart and cash I’m gamblin
With parts that leave them bodies tremblin
(With love)
(With parts)
With parts I shouldn’t say
With parts I shouldn’t play
[Pre chorus]
It’s when flashes get me see
Images of ecstasy
That must be my remedy
When the sun has drawn my way
In its threads of shinin rays
I know there’s just one thing to say
[Chorus]
A loveshot
A loveshot
A loveshot
But never play too hard on me
You just take it easily
Guess I won’t be standin long
Baby you have hit me with
A loveshot
[Bridge]
A single sight a simple love a state of mind have got me go
Tippin the dime tippin it not sippin that wine singin along
She’s gonna stay she’s on her way another date with history
Keep those nerves from boilin babe, time to live the present tense
Not so sane is what they say, He has got the seventh sense
It’s on, he’s in love
It’s on, he’s in love
It’s on, he’s in love
[Chorus]
A loveshot
A loveshot
A loveshot
But never play too hard on me
You just take it easily
Guess I won’t be standin long
Baby you have hit me with
A loveshot

 

[andrushkiwt]

is it a poem or a song? if it's a song, then it doesn't matter what the lyrics are. it's about the context created by certain words, in a certain melody, at a certain tempo, in a certain key....that's a song. Poem-wise, I have no idea. Song-wise, we need to hear it as a tune...even then, it's completely subjective and no one can say it's the best or the worst ever.

There is a painting of a dot on a blank canvas at my local museum. The song "My Charona" exists. Think about those things the next time someone tells you X isn't good.

 

[Robus]

is it a poem or a song? if it's a song, then it doesn't matter what the lyrics are. it's about the context created by certain words, in a certain melody, at a certain tempo, in a certain key....that's a song. Poem-wise, I have no idea. Song-wise, we need to hear it as a tune...even then, it's completely subjective and no one can say it's the best or the worst ever.

There is a painting of a dot on a blank canvas at my local museum. The song "My Charona" exists. Think about those things the next time someone tells you X isn't good.

You're too young to appreciate the greatness that was The Knack about 1979. Otherwise I agree with everything you've written.

 

[andrushkiwt]

Lol, Robus. One hit wonder I believe, yes? I'll look into the tune (wikip) to see if there was something culturally relevant to those lyrics.