Fat_Satchel
I suffer Narcoleptic Rage
Hiya all! Something different...wrote a piece of music a while back with a suspensful metal feel thru it but I couldnt get the lyrics right...nothing fit. I wrote 3 or 4 different versions too hehe...what a pain. These fit nicely, got the scratch tracks cut. I'm curious what you all think...not really considering commerciality (hehe) with this...just painting a realistic picture.
There are a lot of dynamics changes thruout the verses that cant be conveyed in the lyrics...sorry
Thanks
Love with a deadly touch
3am
The house is quiet now
The bottles gone
No more right or wrong
The time has come
To show her how I feel
With nerves of steel
Everything surreal
Creep into the room
Smelling of doom
Laughter escapes me
It betrays my glee
She won’t feel a thing
Less than she brings
Love can be so obscene
Please don’t scream
As I give you all of my love
With a deadly touch
You
You look so sweet
Lying there
Sound asleep
I guess you didn’t think
That I’d find out
Just what you were all about
Well just look at me now
Standing over you
What I should I do?
With someone like you
What should I do?
She won’t feel a thing
Less than she brings
Love can be so obscene
Please don’t scream
As I give you all of my love
With a deadly touch
So many nights that I’ve stood here and tried
To decide if it’s right to let you treat me this way
The voice in my head, full of dread as it says
Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! <repeat>
There are a lot of dynamics changes thruout the verses that cant be conveyed in the lyrics...sorry
Thanks
Love with a deadly touch
3am
The house is quiet now
The bottles gone
No more right or wrong
The time has come
To show her how I feel
With nerves of steel
Everything surreal
Creep into the room
Smelling of doom
Laughter escapes me
It betrays my glee
She won’t feel a thing
Less than she brings
Love can be so obscene
Please don’t scream
As I give you all of my love
With a deadly touch
You
You look so sweet
Lying there
Sound asleep
I guess you didn’t think
That I’d find out
Just what you were all about
Well just look at me now
Standing over you
What I should I do?
With someone like you
What should I do?
She won’t feel a thing
Less than she brings
Love can be so obscene
Please don’t scream
As I give you all of my love
With a deadly touch
So many nights that I’ve stood here and tried
To decide if it’s right to let you treat me this way
The voice in my head, full of dread as it says
Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! <repeat>
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