looking for feedback on an original song

[jon_SKR]

hey all,
This is a song a couple of friends and I did a while back... I remember it being quite a tricky mix for some reason, and I'd love to get some feedback on how it ended up. It's all done and released now, but I still want to get opinions on it. thanks for taking the time!

jon logan - the happy hunting grounds (with Andy Robertson and Ben Noble-Christoff) - YouTube

 

[PDP]

Intro is very long, vocals are buried, cant make out any of the words. The song is Ok.

Recording is nice and clear.

 

[jon_SKR]

Intro is very long, vocals are buried, cant make out any of the words. The song is Ok.

Recording is nice and clear.

right on, thanks for checking it out.

 

[CPFC1985]

I really like the track! Same thought as PDP in respect of the intro and vocals. For a 4 minute track, over a minute is taken up on the intro. Loved the idea of tripling the vocals, but I could hardly make any of them out.

 

[jon_SKR]

I really like the track! Same thought as PDP in respect of the intro and vocals. For a 4 minute track, over a minute is taken up on the intro. Loved the idea of tripling the vocals, but I could hardly make any of them out.

cool, thanks for taking the time to listen! I guess I have bashful singer syndrome, no one should ever be in charge of mixing their own vocals. I guess I have a thing for long intros. on the last song I recorded, the intro is 2 minutes long for a three minute song... I guess I just listened to too much ambient music growing up. thanks again for the feedback!