Look Ma, new song!

[mshea]

Greetings,

Hadn't been here for a while. Thought i'd stop by and let y'all see what i've been up to.

I've posted my newest masterpiece entitled 'Memories' at:

http://www.myspace/mayashea

As usual, the one woman band strikes again. Yes, i wrote that, yes i sang that, yes i played all the parts and yes I hope you like it.

 

[rayc]

The link caused some grief - I had to do a manual search on mspace.
Nice song - the intro doesn't work though - sorry.
The percussion seemed odd still too mechanical.
The vocal perfromances are really good.

 

[mshea]

whoops

Thanks rayc. I forgot to add.com to the address, i've corrected the issue. Thank you for the feedback. I totally agree about the drums.

 

[elcholo]

agree with Ray on the intro and percussion.

nice song...

Mix - Vocals seem 'far back' in the mix, i'd push them out front more. I have a hard time hearing anything you're saying except "here's to the memories..."

maybe the intro would work as a breakdown after a bridge, or maybe a fade out outtro?

good work though...!

oh, and I love your father's work! LTD!!!
Cholo