**** Long time DRUMMER/ENGINEER newbie ****

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Alright, let's check out Deep.

Sounds better than No Friend to me.

The drums sound too distant...too much reverb. The guitar seems to have less reverb on this one. Which is good for this music IMO. Now the snare should sound a little more in the same room, even if it's a big room. The way to achieve this should you decide to experiment, would be to cut some of that reverb back....bring it a little closer. The drums are very centered in the mix and the guitars are panned hard. Almost too much separation I think.

Guitar solo could come up some. Also, the leads at the end are mixed kinda weird to me. Maybe bring 'em right up, and a little off to the side but only like 25% R or L?

I like the vocals a lot better on this one too. Again, I don't think the reverb is working well here. I don't know if it's excessive settings, or if it needs a better quality reverb. But to my ears something about it is cheapening the well recorded sounds here.

I should also add that I've never recorded a drum in my life. So I don't feel confident about commenting on recording practices there. But I do think in the mix, they could be more up front.

The guitars sound very good, but they either should move closer to the center, or the drums should spread out.

All just my humble artistic opinions. Very nitpicky stuff, but you've got the makings of a great product here. So I'm gonna be nitpicky. So there.

:)

Now go listen to some other clinic tunes and share your knowledge.

Tom
 
SLuiCe said:
The drums are very centered in the mix and the guitars are panned hard. Almost too much separation I think. ... The guitars sound very good, but they either should move closer to the center, or the drums should spread out. ... Now go listen to some other clinic tunes and share your knowledge.

I agree with Sluice and I would do both, move the guitars a smidge closer in, and move the drums a smidge out, and a hair to the left.

Thanks for reviewing others.
 
Dear BBS members,

I am glad to be apart of this forum! you guys are awesome!

I travel every weekend from my hometown Spokane, WA to Tacoma, WA - about 300 miles away. That is where I have rehersals. We are getting a 3Mb line run into the studio and will have vid cams setup soon... so i can hang out here in my off time at the studio.

I will look forward to visiting this forum when I get back on monday! and start listening to more tunes, giving them some good thoughts as i try to give some kind of input. remember im a newbie to all of this!!!

I just want to thank everyone for your thoughts.

I have printed this series of feedback and will try some new ideas this weekend. once agian you guys rock!

Dave
 
Welcome to the Board!

Listening to I Wish on headphones. Has a very live feel to it. For this being your first time, I think you did a real nice job. The drums sound good overall, but there does seem to be a bit of phasing going on there...not sure if you planned that or if it is mic-placement...not too bad, and it does make an interesting effect but becomes a bit distracting after awhile.

The levels of the entire piece sound a tad high -- imho -- there seemed to be a bit of distortion.

Very nice playing throughout. Nice guitar solo at the 2:30 mark or so. Vocals sounded very good.

You said that you recorded this demo yourself...does this mean you are playing all the instruments, or does it mean that you recorded your band yourself?

Just wondering because either way this thing totally rocks, and if it is the full band, then I can bet you guys are a great live band. If it is just you, then you rock! ;)

Great job overall! :D
 
boydrj,

I am a drummer for this band.

I deciced to buy some recording gear and give this engineering a shot... Lots of fun...


Thanks for the kind words!

Dave Fender
www.storiesunderstone.com
 
No Friend

Ahhh... yes... anger... aggression... testosterone... adrenaline...
song full of meat. Love it. Metallica/Megadeth flavored... with
your own elements.

Mix isn't bad... lots of reverb on the vocs... but it works... the
backing voice could be more understandeable... maybe pan it out some
and split it into two tracks?

The title caught my attention... I'm doing a cover of a song called
"No Friends"... cool...

The guitar work kinda reminds me of Nuno Bettencourt/Extreme -- maybe
not when he's kicking ass... a little more laid back... but it's
really close to his style. The rhythm reminds me of an Extreme song,
too.

Good job and welcome.


Chad
 
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