I for one think it's pretty lame, I was just drumming to test a mic placement for drums and added a lame keyboard riff over it. I haven't recorded something serious in like two months, I should get crackin' no?
Try a short synth patch to make your note changes more obvious. The interval itself would fit with the drum line, but might be more suited to a bass. Then add another synth part expanding this on top of it.