Yeah, it feels detached from the song a bit. Parts of it work well, others don't. I will take another stab at it, but after the weekend probably. I know I can come up with something that is more of a statement!
Okay, I think this is as good as it is gonna get for this one, short of me playing my ass off for the next 6 months to get my chops a little more on top.
It's cool you doing this stuff for the members here. Listened to most of the posted pieces, all good stuff. I find it fun to put solos to others work sometimes too. More acoustic stuff than this though. Keep up the good work.