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chrisjorge
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Nice tune!
I would love to hear the vocal up in the mix a little more and eq'd a little less in the low end to get rid of the little muddiness that is there. It almost makes it sound like a background drone on most lower note singing.
I love the guitar mix in the intro. The usage of the guitars really creates a very haunting melody line. Very catchy.
I don't hear much kick drum, and the side-stick / hi-hat rhythm could add to the ambiance of the tune with a little more volume and reverb. I could really hear (in my mind) a little high percussion (tamborine / shaker) in the choruses, just to give it a little more high end.
Chris Jorge
I would love to hear the vocal up in the mix a little more and eq'd a little less in the low end to get rid of the little muddiness that is there. It almost makes it sound like a background drone on most lower note singing.
I love the guitar mix in the intro. The usage of the guitars really creates a very haunting melody line. Very catchy.
I don't hear much kick drum, and the side-stick / hi-hat rhythm could add to the ambiance of the tune with a little more volume and reverb. I could really hear (in my mind) a little high percussion (tamborine / shaker) in the choruses, just to give it a little more high end.
Chris Jorge
LI Slim
New member
In my humble opinion I think you should rethink this project a little....
I'm not a recording expert but to my lay ears the mix was muddy and washed out (with reverb?).
As to musicianship the rhythm needs to be defined better. It sounded like the bass, guitar and even percussion sort of wandered around. You need more of a base. The vocal was kind of thin but maybe that was the mix, since it does sound like the vocalist has a good voice.
The song itself starts with a good idea but then stays there. I would consider a bridge section.
I don't mean to be harsh; I think you guys can do this but it needs to be reworked.
I'm not a recording expert but to my lay ears the mix was muddy and washed out (with reverb?).
As to musicianship the rhythm needs to be defined better. It sounded like the bass, guitar and even percussion sort of wandered around. You need more of a base. The vocal was kind of thin but maybe that was the mix, since it does sound like the vocalist has a good voice.
The song itself starts with a good idea but then stays there. I would consider a bridge section.
I don't mean to be harsh; I think you guys can do this but it needs to be reworked.