kind of a rocker....

[drdrew]

hey all...i'd love some feedback on this tune. there's no vocals, so you can't tear me apart for that this time!

click on "in progress" hi fi if possible.

http://www.mp3.com/musturdmilesmary

thanks in advance!

i really like the beats on this one.

btw...you will be hearing an alesis sr16, akai dps 16,
johnson j-station, and prs guitar, and a crappy bass going through a joemeek vc3.

 

[gibs]

nice programming on the drum machine...I thought the crappy bass had a good sound....vocals would be nice, if you add any, let us know......gibs

 

[GT]

drdrew,

I liked that alot. I also have a sr-16 , and agree with Gibs nice programming.

Ripping guitar solo, great work!!

I think I know what you're going through, should I leave it as an instrumental? This song to my ears makes a great instrumental! It kept my interest very well without vocals.

One nit pick, digital ring on sr-16 snare at the begining, not your fault. It gets drowned out when guitars come in.

Bass sounded good, keep crappy bass, and get a new drum mcahine that doesn't have digital ring. Me too.

GT

 

[LI Slim]

Great guitar work. Vocal should come in after the fourth repitition of the basic theme, and it should come in hard. I think the bass is crappy. That looks like my dog (although he has different rims on his sunglasses). Is that a black lab mutt (like mine) or a purebread?

 

[Buck62]

drew...
Great work, my man!
Great playing, clean recording, and a nice mix.
Some edgy lyrics would make it radio-ready.
Simply put... it rawks!

 

[drdrew]

hey guys...thanks for taking the time to listen! (especially those of you with slow connections like mine)

the dog is a chocolate lab...field champion parents...

anyone who might want to collaborate and add vocals, i'd gladly send these tracks to!

thanks again for the feedback...i'm glad you seemed to like it alright.