Yodelling blues,
You have the vocal about right (but not quite enough yodelling inflection).
Given this path is so well worn, you have no excuse for the laborious and heavy handed backing track. Everything is too heavy and thick. It needs much more crack and spunk. The fuzzy guitars lack both clarity and warmth, they sound DI’d and treated with amp simulators. This has all the ingredients and skill required, but it needs to be a lot sharper.