beezelbubba
Shitty Buddhist
My latest piece of crap.
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jimistone
long standing member
I like it man. It's got a cool laid back vibe. I love the trippy keyboard and slide guitar parts when they come in...they really compliment the song. Good arrangement.
only suggestion I have is to bring the vocal up a bit. It's buried in a few places.
good job beez!
only suggestion I have is to bring the vocal up a bit. It's buried in a few places.
good job beez!
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NotThatBright
New member
Ditto what jimistone said, pretty much. My favorite part was that organ or whatever at 1:58... it reminded me of a (I think) Led Zeppelin song that must be buried deep in the back of my brain, because I don't know much Led Zeppelin. I was ok with the vocal level, but I tend to like when the vocals are somewhere in the middle-to-back part of the mix.
dobro
Well-known member
Good groove. Why'd you pan the vocal left?
beezelbubba
Shitty Buddhist
There was a low and high part on the verses, each panned about 30(-/+), then it's just the low part on the chorus. I didn't notice it sounding very noticeable.Probably should just go back and pan them both straight up.
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K-dub
Well-known member
Yeah, the high part isn't as noticeable ... and so the ear is drawn left to the clearer low part. I can hear the high part, but you have to make a conscious effort to listen for it. Panning center and blending in the high a little more should fix.
LOVE the tonal textures you employed on this Matt. Just great. Really cool vibe to the groove too.
dobro
Well-known member
Yeah, what Kdub said. But...question: if the main vocal is panned center and you wanted the second vocal panned away from it (for separation and for size) how would you do it? Just pan it to one side fifteen or twenty? Or would you clone it and delay and EQ the crap out of one side?
beezelbubba
Shitty Buddhist
I'd probably just pan them both dead center.