just listen?

[faderbug]

please give this a listen and critique all you want

i'm still working on the mix.


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=481447

sorry for posting this twice.

 

[rayc]

Faderbug,
Nice shades of J't'aim in the intro.
The breathlessness is a tad wasted when I can't comprehend what the panting is about.
I like the guitars until & after the solo - things fall way too flat for too long in it. I think you should fade the rhythm guitar in sooner rather than later to hold interest.
The ending works very well indeed.
Cheers
rayC

 

[faderbug]

Faderbug,
The breathlessness is a tad wasted when I can't comprehend what the panting is about.
rayC

pardon my french


but really, what do you reckon it's about?


cheers btw, and you might be right about the middle part, i'm having second thoughts about it myself.

 

[XLR]

Good vocal. I wish I'd paid more attention during my high school French classes though some of this wouldn't have been in the school textbook. I like the guitar parts. Overall it's a creative arrangement that works well... though the fake drums at :46-1:17 and thin guitar line at 2:12-2:30 are less effective IMO.

Tim

 

[faderbug]

sounds rather nice actualy. i think you should change the solo though. nice one.

 

[Jack Real]

Hi

It's a very nice song. I would increase the volume of the vocals since she is singing well and the lyrics are interesting. I'm not crasy about the drum though.

Nice work.

/Jack Real.