To quote one of your lyrics: "I'm like Christ on the mic, but in the physical form."
Now first off, I can respect someone who has a lot of confidence in their abilities . . . because in the industry you're trying to break in to, you're going to need it. Obviously, there's lots of competition, and things will get brutal.
But I have to wonder just why it is that so many of the folks doing this particular genre of musical expression feel the need to flaunt what appears to be such explosive arrogance and pretentiousness (?) Is that what it takes to get discovered? I mean, do you really think record execs are sifting through mounds and mounds of demo tapes looking for the act that is the most full of him/herself?
I hope you don't take this as a personal knock. I think your stuff sounds good, and it sounds like you're working really hard at it . . . and you seem like a nice person and all with intelligent lyrics to boot. But this is a trend I've been seeing a lot in R&B / hip-hop / rap genre, and it just seems logical to me that the whole cockiness thing has been fully explored to it's depths, and it's only a matter of time before the public is going to look for something else . . .
. . . and subsequently, the A&R guys might be thinking the same thing. So if you want to stand out from the pack, maybe you could try to distinguish yourself a little more. There's some intelligence in your lyrics . . . don't spoil it by reducing yourself to the level of the pimps and the ghetto queens that are already littering our airwaves on the radio and MTV.