SeekingTheTruth
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This is just the first verse of a slow-ish song I've been jamming on with my band.
Just a rough draft. Let me know what you think.
I've walked a thousand miles
In the shoes of a faded style
Give it up, and look at me
I'm not who I want to be
And today those clouds will part
And one day you'll have a broken heart
But right now your safe with me
For how long I can't garuntee
(Chorus)
Its basically about someone whos lived through life and is giving advice to someone who's just starting it. They're trying to make sure the younger guy doesn't give up on his dreams because if you do before you know it it'll be too late. And life's not worth living.
I have other verses but still working.
Also if anyone has any ideas to better hammer in the message of the song in the last stanza I would appreciate it.
Just a rough draft. Let me know what you think.
I've walked a thousand miles
In the shoes of a faded style
Give it up, and look at me
I'm not who I want to be
And today those clouds will part
And one day you'll have a broken heart
But right now your safe with me
For how long I can't garuntee
(Chorus)
Its basically about someone whos lived through life and is giving advice to someone who's just starting it. They're trying to make sure the younger guy doesn't give up on his dreams because if you do before you know it it'll be too late. And life's not worth living.
I have other verses but still working.
Also if anyone has any ideas to better hammer in the message of the song in the last stanza I would appreciate it.