Junkie Whore - a Greg_L rock and/or roll original!

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Here's a new one. Pretty silly song about a girl that grew up priveleged, dropped out, found drugs, became a hooker, and is now realizing she needs to get her shit together.

"Junkie Whore"
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6479417

Any comments/critiques are welcome and appreciated. Hope yall like it. :D

Thanks,
Greg


Here's the dumb lyrics:

Daddy's girl in a pampered world
Her dress was cute and her hair was curled
One day she would own the world....
No self-respect, no self-esteem
She dropped out of school at just 14
And now her hair is blue and green....

Oh no!
She's doin' blow!
And she's a ho!
She's a junkie whore!

She's a dirty junkie whore
She don't wanna work that corner store no more - oh no
She's got big plans
She don't need a man no more - whoa no
That junkie girl's gonna rule the world
and she don't need a fix no more

She met some dude and shot up smack
She popped some ludes and smoked some crack
She does her job laying on her back....
And now she walks the streets at night
She sucks dick and knows how to fight
But she knows that it aint right....

Oh no!
She's doin' blow!
And she's a ho!
She's a junkie whore!

She's a dirty junkie whore
She don't wanna work that corner store no more - oh no
She's got big plans
She don't need a man no more - whoa no
That junkie girl's gonna rule the world
and she don't need a fix no more

J-U-N-K-I-E, a junkie whore's no way to be
W-H-O-R-E, she's gonna fix herself you'll see!

She's a dirty junkie whore
She don't wanna work that corner store no more - oh no
She's got big plans
She don't need a man no more - whoa no
That junkie girl's gonna rule the world
And she don't need a fix no more....
She don't need a fix no more....
She don't need no fix or dicks or drugs or hugs
And she don't need no fuckin man no more!

Go!
Go!
Go!
Junkie whore!


:D
 
Dude, You need some therapy :) I like it, but you are freakin me out.
 
got a great thrashy vibe to it!
kinda like a cross between the ramones and the blasters.
i dig it.
she's a ho.
a dirty junky whore.


LOL
great tune!
love the wah break at the end.....
 
The vocals seem a little stuck back in a box or something.

Good song, though.
 
Jeez.......just a little energy is all it needs. </s>

Dude! What the hell you doing on SoundClick? Can't believe you're not signed or sumphin'.

The usual top-shelf of the hack n' slash genre. [applause]
 
this is some great big dumb rock n roll!!! love it!!!

everything sounds really good--tight performance, great mix, excellent sonics. all-around great effort. glad to see you're doing originals now! :)
 
Yeah, I guess distant is the word. I feel like the vocals should be a little louder, but more up front. Over top of the guitars and drums and bass and in your face like David Loin Cloth:D
 
this is some great big dumb rock n roll!!! love it!!!

everything sounds really good--tight performance, great mix, excellent sonics. all-around great effort. glad to see you're doing originals now! :)
Thanks man. Big dumb rock and roll is my middle name! :D

Yeah, I guess distant is the word. I feel like the vocals should be a little louder, but more up front. Over top of the guitars and drums and bass and in your face like David Loin Cloth:D

Okay thanks. I'll look into the vox tomorrow with fresher ears.
 
Uh...wow. That is pretty damn good. Great energy, cool ending and just a really heartwarming story about an all-American girl...
 
Told Ya So............
It has a Cramps vibe too - bit too tight for them though.
Good rubber band bass.
The harmonied vox work well too.
The new 7 Steps Anthem!
PS
Love the feedback.
 
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Lots of fun, very catchy too. Its very well done, no nits from me.:cool:
 
I'm in class and you have NO idea how much it hurts me to not be able to listen to this right now.
 
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