Mix seemed good, a tad bright for my ears, but that might just be me. It seemed like everything fit for that type of music. Nothing negative from me except its brightness.
that kick sounds nice. Vocals sound good and professional. This track doesn't need critique really for this genre it's there. Everything else is just personal preference. If I had to say something the only thing I noticed was the vocal in spots is hard to understand but not because of pronunciation or phrasing you could clarify it which some eq/hi end.