
Cool song, nice to hear something a bit different around here. Nice job with the Mandolin playing.
My only suggestion would be to make it a bit tighter. There are parts where the mandolin can take liberty with timing, and parts where it cant. The beginning is where I would keep it in strict time, to get the listener accustomed to the rhythm before taking any liberties.
Wonderful. Glad you both enjoyed!My 2 yr. old and I had a really good time dancing to that one - thanks!
I get the wet feel and appreciate the reverb--but it muddies up the mando a bit. Don't know what kind of reverb you're using, but if you have the ability to filter the verb, it might be worth trying to cut some mids out of the 'verb, leaving more highs. You'll still have that nice wet sound, but the mandolin itself will be a bit more clear.
How about a death metal arrangement?