Is my mix "there" yet?

[scottmusic22]

Here's the mix: New Years Song | Scott Ogilvy

Is this mix "there" yet in all aspects?
It gets a little muddy at the last chorus, how can I fix that?
Is this mix at a professional level? How can it get "there"?

I think that I should be able to get this sounding nearly perfect because there are so few elements and instruments in it!

Thanks so much for reading and listening, please respond!

 

[ddrummer8]

Pretty good tune. Something I could see myself listening to. First thing you will have to do is get the autotune or melodyne which ever you used in check. It was way to apparent for a vocal song. I can hear the worbbling from it, especially on the line "of how my old life got away".