Inviscerate the Proletariat

[grn]

http://www.myspace.com/ciaoroma

It's the last song. Would like to hear anything and everything you think. Still hung up on the girlfriend thing.

Lyrics:
oooh I love you
like chocolate milk and chinese food
you make me happy, so happy, I could make you happy too

mmhmm you are beauty
like hummingbirds and butterflies
anytime that I'm around you, it's lovely, I hear nothing but lullabies

and I feel like the lonely moon without you

ooh I get jealous
when you go out with other guys
I know that they are just friends and it's stupid, but if I lost you I would die

mmmm I worry
you deserve to be a queen
I need you like trees need the sunlight, without you I can't even breathe

 

[ido1957]

Very oriental sounding.....cool percussion at the beginning of the verses....

The vocals are a bit far apart and they are out of sync with each other at times so the spread makes that more apparent. Maybe if you pulled them in a bit they would rub together better.

Apart from that I really like your vocals - they suit the style of the song well. They are smooth and relaxing and good for a love song - a little folk sounding.....Like the lyrics too - fit the vibe well- romantic and upbeat!

Good tune .....