intoxicated

[subvibe]

Hi
Here is a new song i have done Intoxicated (sugar rush mix)
its a slow tempo song with a lot of synth pads

Intoxicated



Thanks for taking the time to listen


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[DM60]

Wow, very nice! I don't have anything I could possibly say that would improve it. Some might say the mix is a little dark, but I personally mix my stuff that way.

 

[PorterhouseMusic]

Impressive! The style of music is typically not my thang. But, I like it. You should be proud of that.

 

[Papanate]

Hi
Here is a new song i have done Intoxicated (sugar rush mix)
its a slow tempo song with a lot of synth pads

Intoxicated

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Thanks for taking the time to listen

You are getting really good at capturing a vibe - one thing though - for me- but the opening vocal is too crspy for me - the Consonants are popping in my ears.

 

[LaceSensor]

I really dig the vibe of this track. My critique would be more on the arrangement to suit the style better. There was a cheesy sounding tom fill I would just remove. And same for the auto-tune, either dial it way back or turn it off. The song wants to lean more organic/natural but some of the arrangement has more of a robotic/mechanical feel. The two seem to be in conflict with each other. The mix sounds great and the vibe is dense in a good way.

 

[subvibe]

Hi @LaceSensor

Thank you so much for your input
i agree the tom fill is corny . FYI there is no Autotune the vocals are double tracked so i suppose a similar effect

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[dobro]

Maybe it's the double tracking you mentioned, but the sound of the vocal is tricksy to my ears and makes me want to hear it as it was sung.