In spite of ourselves...John Prine cover...critique

[bluesguy63]

Thought I would try this one...honesty appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/bluesguy1963/in-spite-of-ourselves-cover

 

[ido1957]

Take a breath before the end of the lines, you're going pitchy because you're running out of air.
And please edit out that noise at the beginning and end.