In Life (Rap)

  • Thread starter Thread starter Killah_Trakz
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Cool intro. I like the vocals, the delivery, lyrics and the sound...although I think some of the doubling could be a little tighter.

I wasn't too high on the drums myself, sorry. They just had kind of a generic drum machiney vibe going. It would be cool I think if you had a bigger sound there or mixed it up some with the addition and subtraction of layers of different drum sounds on top of that basic beat.

Basically, the vocals were big and clear and up front and panned pretty well, but the backing track seemed a bit tame and centered by comparison. Nice job though man, and obviously these are just one dude's less-than-expert opinions...
 
Good vocal delivery. Vocals have good detail, but I'd try to get a little more low mids out of them. They just a bit on the thin side.

I thought the vocals were too far forward. They're way on top of the backing tracks.

The mix seems kind of narrow. That might be because the guitar and keys, which are panned to either side, are so far back in the mix. Bringing them forward might fill out the stereo spread.
 
This is pretty good. I think some better samples on the snare, and bass drum would be better. Vocals were good. Not bad.
 
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