I'm gonna be brave and post somethin' !

[Moonrider]

This one's a work in progress, but I'm hoping better ears than mine can point out a) flaws in the current mix and b) flaws in the arrangement.

The name of the song is "Voice of the Rose" at:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/jamesprojectmusic.htm

I hope Stephen King will forgive me for writing this

 

[Dogman]

OK. Nice voice. I like the guitar. Just kind of sits in there. Nice melody. Drums seem a bit muted, at least on my speakers. Overall, good song.

Ed

 

[earworm]

hi there,

are it real drums? sounds like a drumcomputer to me,
the guitars, are recorded trough a POD or fx processor, not with a mic?

if u want real harsh comments:

i think the vocals are too loud, too much bass,
guitar sounds a bit harsh, i think cause u used an FX pedal to record,
not a mic and preamp

the drums come trough OK, but they sound so flat, lifeless,
but u hear kick, snare, hihat, thats good,

tell us some more about how u recorded all this,
i'm curious,

of course my critics aren't superfriendly, but i'm not really into
this kind of music either

regards,

earworm

 

[travelin travis]

drums sound too compressed? I'm not sure. vocals are out of tune in parts.......listen to parts that go from lower pitch to higher pitch e.g. "rose". vocals sound like they were sung too low........need a little more energy.