I'm A Wanna Be ,Please bash my performance

[W.I.S.C.]

I took a machete to a Duran Duran song,then wrote the lyrics on the spot,the whole project took about 4 hours from idead to final mix,all done in ACID.I can't redo the mix cuz I accidentally erased the master files(See,Wanna BE).Rip this song a new asshole for me...
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www.nowhereradio.com/vilechild

 

[jake-owa]

Dude that really does suck. The rhymes are fuckin" lame and cliche. Even worse it sounds like a loser white trash story but not the kind Eminem does more like the kind you have to hear from some bum on the bus. The beat is crap and your engineering comes to it's ultimate shitty head when the lyrical panning comes in. I can't believe I listened to the whole crappy thing. "Walking papers"? Damn that's stupid. I hate the original song you ripped off but you actually managed to make it worse. Give up or at least don't post this crap around here.

Good enough?

The real burn is I am completely serious about that.

 

[W.I.S.C.]

Tanx Jake,well not really.This won't be my last post so just as a warning...I'll be back.I LOL,it's all in good fun and your ending line was killer.A big un thank you and don't playa hate

 

[B.SABBATH]

LMAO!!!

 

[stray411]

WISC,

I'm going to say that "Who Will Love You" is not bad at all if it's one of your first attempts at hip-hop. This sounds like I did when I started out with karaoke disks and simple rhymes. Definitely not something I would listen to for enjoyment, but not a bad start either.

However, I also checked out "Helpless, Breathless" on your site. That sounds like you singing, are you playing the guitar as well? I think this is a great song and you have a strong voice as well. Listened to it 4 times now. Great job.

Your versatility makes "Who Will Love You" more tolerable, but "Helpless" seems to be your strong suit IMHO. That sounds bad, but you know what I mean.

Stray

 

[W.I.S.C.]

Tanx Stray,
I did The Rap for my own head mostly and as kind of a goof cuz my wife likes eminem,I made it a little cheezy on purpose and that wasn't my first attempt at hip hop it was my second.If you like me singing check out www.jacobsladder.us to see me and some guys I just got mixed up with also look forward to some 'Metal' in the Vilechild section of Nowhere.I'm gonna hit all the bases.And also Thanx for not ripping open the wound that Jake so lovingly(I know I asked for it) abliged to produce.See ya on tour...