If ya all ain't mad at me...

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Something we've been working on. It's actually the first song in a long time that I wrote the words to. I had a friend, Betty, come over and sing it, and Mark put down the lead guitar tracks. This is like the first take so there improvement to come I hope. It Has been a long time.
http://www.nowhereradio.com/flash/singles
 
Not a bad song Flash.Better fidelity and stereo spread than your last tune..........the vocals need to be re-tracked.get her to sing them until she matches every single phrase on the doubles.

Catchy little southern rockish tune.
 
Was this for "Just Friends"?

Okay, that is the one I listened to. Real clean sound. The placement sounds good. The vocals sound like they could use a little boost in the mix. They are kind of buried in there. Real nice guitar solo and great playing throughout. The drums sounded fine to me but they also sounded a little bit quiet in the mix -- could just be on my end though --

Nice singing and good song! :)
 
Thanks Guys! It's been awhile. I had the blues but I'm coming back. I have a lot of things going on in my life, as I know we all have at times. You guy's have always been my friends, and I hope it stays that way. I'm here and I want to stay. Talk to ya soon...
 
Flash said:
Thanks Guys! It's been awhile. I had the blues but I'm coming back. I have a lot of things going on in my life, as I know we all have at times. You guy's have always been my friends, and I hope it stays that way. I'm here and I want to stay. Talk to ya soon...
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Glad to see you back around Flash.;)
 
Hey Flash...............glad to have you back man.
The song's pretty cool. I like the guitar riff....drums could come up some. The biggest thing is what Kramer pointed out....the dbl'ed vocals don't really match up. If you don't want to retrack them you could try turning the weaker of the two down so it colors the vox but isn't quite loud enough to be distracting from the other one.
 
cool guitar lick in the begining.....
yeah the vox is sorta distracting....
this almost sounds a little too low for her voice.....imo
song tells a pretty good story...tho....
maybe she just isnt confident..in her voice.....???..i can almost hear where she wants to cut loose a bit.....
nice solo too....its alitlle too quiet.....bring that up...!!!!!..


thanks jamal
 
Your right jamal, She wanted me to transpose it up a couple of key's. That's what's coming next. She'll be back over thursday to redo the song and we have another lined up ready to go.

Lt. Bob, Good to see ya again. I'll be hanging in there now.

Hey Kramer, What can I say, it's good to be back. I always enjoyed you post. Your ears airn't bad either. I always enjoy the crittiques.

Talk to ya all soon.
 
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