ideas on this mix? "OCD"

[eyema_believer]

Hey guys,

I spent about 4 hours mixing this today. Comments? Suggestions? Emotional outbursts?

Lemme have it!

~Shawn

 

[rayc]

Good balance!
A couple of times the bass sounds a little pitchy - it's not really likely uness it's fretless so it's probably just my ears or a tension in the harmony.
Some, a little, of the growl in the bass in the instrumental section would be good in the rest of the song.
The violin is a good addition but it seems to appear only a couple of times - if it's playing more generally it's not cutting through.
The vocals sit well.
Drums sit well.
The harmonics on the guitar sit well too.
Tastey stuff mate!

 

[eyema_believer]

Good balance!
A couple of times the bass sounds a little pitchy - it's not really likely uness it's fretless so it's probably just my ears or a tension in the harmony.
Some, a little, of the growl in the bass in the instrumental section would be good in the rest of the song.
The violin is a good addition but it seems to appear only a couple of times - if it's playing more generally it's not cutting through.
The vocals sit well.
Drums sit well.
The harmonics on the guitar sit well too.
Tastey stuff mate!

Thanks for the listen Ray!
The bass is pulling against a sub-harmonic synth pad during parts of the song. I'm going to have to nix it, except in the very end where it's needed.
Your ears are not failing, the violin comes only in certain parts. Silence is a note!

Peace!

~Shawn