I wrote these yesterday, what do ya'll think

[Freethinker]

We Come In Peace

WE COME IN PEACE

Obey,Obey,just what your told
Media bought your mind and your soul

Marching, killing, they're all terrorist you see
How long till the finger points, at you and me?

Freedom, oh yes freedom, it's why we invade your land
Democracy, the reason, your blood in the sand

(Bombing, killing, torture
We come in peace
Man made holy rapture
We come in peace
Resistance is futile
We come in peace
Your death is worthwhile
We come in peace)

Control, control, now you are free
Your tyrannt, now my Democracy

Look there! A terrorist, can't you see?
Must kill them all, for Democracy

Men women children, shall not get in the way
Freedom through terror, so be it, mercy has no sway

(Bombing killing torture
We come in peace
Man made holy rapture
We come in peace
Resistance is futile
We come in peace
Your death is worthwhile
We come in peace)

 

[Toonsmith]

Just a wild guess. An anti-war guy?

 

[Freethinker]

Just a wild guess. An anti-war guy?

Nope i don't oppose war in general ,as long as it serves a noble purpose and is worth the price of death to so many young people actually fighting it. But i do oppose this current war, which has already proven to have been started on false pretenses and the US has proved itself as bad or worse than those the government ousted from power, .ie recent torturing and murdering of POW's.

But hey what about the song, it wil be a hardcore metal type, lot's of deep growling vocals and power cords.

 

[Garry Sharp]

It would be interesting to hear it recorded, even as a rough demo. Lyrics in isolation do nothing for me at all; yours (like mine and most others) don't stand up as poetry but they are not meant to.

Having said that I share your sentiments and there are some very neat lines in there. Even making the effort to write it is a worthwhile contribution, all power to you.