i was bored......so

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seconds please!
i put up another short on soundclicks

this one is GOT A FRIEND

trust me it's real short and it's late ,and if your reading this or even awake you probably don't have anything eles better to do :D :D :D :D :D
 
See if you can process the bass a bit more to make a tuba out of it - that'd sound really good for the bass line.
I think you should do the Jack Pain thing to the voice - I like it. The prob is this voice is neither over treated nor natural it needs a step in one direction. OR re record it as a really close mic'd confessional whisper.
Guitar sounds fine for the piece. Some more oscillation ($20 keyboard sounding) on the string thing I'd be nice too.
Brevity is wit.
 
thanx for the ideas dude....i 'm not even sure if i'll really make this into a finished song ever...i really was just bored so i figured ....what the hell.

and it is a 20 dollar key board...even on the tuba thing.
just guitar vox keyboard......oh..... and alittle reverb.
 
Sounds pretty good..vocals might sound better a bit dryer...more natural. They aren't bad, but might fit better if they was more natural. Interesting tune. I enjoyed it.
 
Hey dude, nice tune. I especially liked when the "strings" came in. Thanks for posting it!
 
Cool tune man, Kinda Jaggerish vox.

The bass could use some tightening up, and the vox could do with a tad less verb.

Love the arrangment man, just some twisting of those knobs, and you`ve got a nice one. :cool:
 
Yeah, have to agree with everybody here. Will be a really cool song when it's a little bit longer.
 
thanx everyone for checkin it out!
this place is really laidback ya know.....i'm gonna have to find one of those mic threads to get back into the aggra world so i don't get spoiled by the kindness:)ha ha

dog---i'm gonna redue the whle thing soon....i had all the verb on vox cuz they were pretty much crap dry............i recorded it fallin down drunk...if you can imagine...

guitar--thanks for the shout...gotta love those cheap keys when you need somthin different.

nak--yah..those vox just kill it...and the bass is will be a real bass in the new mix..thanks man

cmh--i havn't really figured out how i'm gonna fill it in yet to make it stretch...not sure i can, but hope to.
 
Yeah less reverb, more compression on the vox. You've got a nice tune here. Tidy it up and it will be real good
 
ok heres the new one

i finally had some time to try out some things with this song.....

check'er out :o :o
 
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