I need some outside opinions on a song

  • Thread starter Thread starter noahrex
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What you need is to delete your double post!
 
Hmmmm. If I have to listen for one more minute, I'm gonna kill someone.

j/k. :p

Interesting song. Starts off kinda creepy like a vintage Pink Floyd tune. I don't get the techno shit added in later though. I'd rather hear it continue the creepy vibe throughout with maybe some more keys or acoustic guitar and stuff added in to build the overall feel as the song goes on. The techno stuff just doesn't belong. This isn't my style of music, so I don't know what kind of effect your'e going after with the vocals, but they sound sort of 'boxy'. Maybe thats what you want. Maybe not. I'd like to hear them more natural sounding. that's just me though. The production and mix is decent though.

'Sunshine' is kinda boring. Too much of the same for me. Too long. No real 'hook'. Vocals sound good - but way too loud in some parts. Good playing and arrangement though.
 
yeah i dont know how to delete them...let me know so i can get rid of that. thanks
 
The drums & bass are just wrong for the synth, voice, lyric & melody, (all of which combined are quite interesting) & then the rhythm goes all Casio auto appeg & backing - kill kill kill or just plain perverse?
 
i'm not quite sure what you mean by that last part. so the sounds combined are interesting...good or bad? any suggestions?
 
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